Developing our digipak (4)

For help with our inside digipak, my group and I looked at some digipaks in class to give us inspiration to what we should put in our inside cover of the digipak. We found an inside of a digipak online which had the same genre as our EDM digipak:

This digipak has writing about his fans, his family and his journey to where the artist is today. However, we did feel as if there was just too much writing on the inside panel to our liking, so David created another draft of the digipak so we could see our digipak as a final products with all sides completed:

The feedback we received from this draft was that the text was too big and it seemed too many companies which he was thanking and that the description of him, about his age, was not needed. 

There were also other digipaks which we saw in class, for example there is one below, which is quite opposite to the other exemplar digipak:

Even though this inside (along with others) showed an image of the band/artist it didn't really fit with our genre and style of our artist. This was the same with most of the examples which we looked at but we are looking to extend on our last draft of our digipak.