Our feedback from Luke

After listening to this feedback with my group we created key points and what we are going to do about them below:

Initial feedback for our first idea

• First Luke said that we didn't have enough ideas with the foam to show a clear picture.
• Foam is a lot easier to do than water (cleaning up wise), but harder with continuity if not full developed.
• If the performers are dry and they then get wet because foam is being chucked at them, they will have to dry off and re do their make up, hair and so on, it takes a lot of time and effort (the difficulty with foam).
• Foam is harder to shoot than water, with water you get loads of ripples in the water and looks really nice, but with foam it doesn't really move, does but really slowly, so it can get very boring
• Foam seems to be related to the pop genre, our song choice isn't very pop, it's quite chilled out with a bit of pop involved but not enough to make the whole music video be about foam.

Development of idea 1 after Luke's feedback

• We can get rid of the foam and replace it with the balls you get in children's ball pits
• For the first scene we can have her running a bath, so water and we can get loads of shots of the water and how it moves and then she adds fairy liquid into the bath to make bubbles/foam 
• We are going to change the song to a more pop vibe so the foam doesn't seem strange. 
• With the foam we can get her to slowly blow the foam out of her hands to have more shots. 

Initial feedback for our first idea 2

• The idea of the two dancers split screen is brilliant, very different.
• However the idea is very hard to do. a lot of planning needed, have to make sure the camera is the same height for both dancers.
• You can't have a location in one side but have a studio built idea on another side (boy cleaning in the kitchen, girl eating dinner at a restaurant)

Development of idea 2 after Luke's feedback

• change the narrative and have it solely a dance number, it will look interesting because they are dancing together but separate locations.
• we will keep it just in the studio, or have them going out of the studio at the same time and dance out in an location like down a street or something.